Talk:James FitzGerald, 8th Earl of Desmond

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This page is almost entirely two large quotations. Perhaps this is acceptable if its the only available and prudent way to depict the history and character of the individual. However I think this article really needs to be reworked to paraphrase some of what is said here in the quote.DaltonCastle (talk) 04:57, 11 July 2012 (UTC)

A fair critique: this page does need a lot of work. Having started it as almost entirely the quote, I'll try to get around to reworking it in the near future if no one else does. Rinne na dTrosc (talk) 02:55, 29 July 2012 (UTC)