Talk:Labor rights in American meatpacking industry

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I think you’ve done a great job so far with this article. The information is clear and easy to comprehend while still providing readers with a holistic view on the topic. I would suggest expanding the industry response section because I feel there must be more content on the debates industry leaders had with following guidelines on quality of the work environment due to their concern on increasing production. Also, I would try to find more data or create a section that focuses specifically on the conditions today in the industry (current issues etc.) because you do a good job at giving a historical timeline of events and information but I feel the “current day” state is a little weaker comparatively. The article is also in need of of more images and sources.MBouchein (talk) 01:29, 31 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I am so glad this information is now available through Wikipedia--great work! This article is comprehensive, accessible, clearly written, and appropriately sourced. I would focus on avoiding strong statements that might sound like original research and using in-text citations to clarify meaning and context. The article is currently fairly-U.S. focused, so you might try to find some more international research as well. Finally, I believe an image of a meatpacking facility would be a valuable addition to this article. Overall, keep up the great work, and thank you for your contribution! Magenstat (talk) 05:39, 31 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

98.202.131.126 (talk) 01:25, 31 October 2016 (UTC)This article has a lot of good info, but also reads like a persuasive essay by a labor organizer rather than an encyclopedia article. It needs some others sources integrated into the article to maintain NPOV. I made an addition to the paragraph on Sinclair's the Jungle, which was a polemical work criticized for numerous factual errors; the Jungle is simply not a reliable source for information, ,and readers need to know that[reply]

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The title sounds awkward as it's missing a "the" - I propose the article's name be changed to "American meatpacking industry labor rights" or similar. Sideriver84 (talk) 00:26, 8 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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