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Did her PR woman write this?--MartinUK 01:13, 6 March 2007 (UTC) lesley I would like to contact you. I am margarita suarez from sevilla(spain)my e-mail address is margasuarezcastell@msn.com 1966[reply]

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Some suggestions for improvement as the article is expanded:

  • Appropriate infobox should be added
  • Photograph should be added from a source with a free license
  • Needs some copy editing eg to reduce overly promotional tone in places
  • Some basic biographical information required, eg education, place of residence
  • Article needs expanding and should emphasise reasons for notability of subject
  • Article should be divided into appropriate subheadings
  • List of roles should be included
  • References should be added, preferably in the inline format
  • External link present which could be used to expand article

Espresso Addict 20:56, 13 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]