Talk:Libranet

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Reads like an advertisement, especially in the beginning of the first paragraph.
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I agree that the first paragraph read like an ad, and in fact it was a direct quote from the Libranet User Manual.
I had added to the history section long after the first paragraph was written, but I wasn't sure if I should alter what someone else wrote or not. However, after seeing your advertisement warning, I figured I would also clean up the first paragraph. So, hope it now meets your approval. --Mark Alfred