Talk:Lutz Tavern/Archive 1
Sources
[edit]http://www.nytimes.com/2003/06/22/magazine/the-marketing-of-no-marketing.htmlhttp://www.nytimes.com/2003/06/22/magazine/the-marketing-of-no-marketing.html?src=pm&pagewanted=3 (page 3)
--Another Believer (Talk) 17:05, 13 April 2014 (UTC)
http://www.wweek.com/portland/article-23764-permalink.html---Another Believer (Talk) 22:58, 9 January 2015 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:51, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
Hi! Happy to review. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 17:51, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
A well-written article. Only a few comments:
- In the lead, perhaps you could add that "Pabst Blue Ribbon" refers to a beer? I wondered what it meant.
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- You need not mention ref. 1 after each line. You can simply put it at the end of the para it supports. Nevertheless, if you fear this may attract "citation needed" tags then you need not take my suggestion.
- I think the current display is good given my experience writing many other GAs and going through those reviews. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- 60-foot (18 m) x 15-foot (4.6 m) You can try writing this as {{convert|60|*|15|ft|m}} that gives 60×15 feet (18.3×4.6 m).
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- other Portland establishments, including Crow Bar and Clinton Street Pub You should say that these are Portland establishments when you first mention them, earlier in the section.
- Done. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- Any idea who Robert Kowalski is?
- Apart from a bar owner? No. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
No copyvio detected, images are relevant and properly licensed. The above points addressed, I would go ahead to promote this article. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 18:21, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you so much for your time and assistance. ---Another Believer (Talk) 20:06, 24 April 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for your quick response. I am sure this is good to go. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 05:12, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
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