Talk:Margot Becke-Goehring

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Updated article class to C because of evaluation of ORES script: --SolidStateHeini (talk) 13:10, 14 April 2019 (UTC) Updated article class to B because evaluation of ORES script results in GA. --SolidStateHeini (talk) 20:39, 20 April 2019 (UTC)

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Margot Becke-Goehring/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Canada Hky (talk · contribs) 11:51, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Hello - I am happy to review this article for GA status. I typically go through and make comments as I read, and then once most issues have been resolved / addressed, I run through the checklist to ensure I haven't missed anything. Canada Hky (talk) 11:51, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Initial notes[edit]

This was an interesting article to read, I always appreciate the opportunity to learn about new chemists.

For some initial thoughts on improving this article potentially to GA status:

  • The lead should be expanded. It should cover all of the high points of the article, so it needs to include education, work focus and any notable awards received.
  • There is material in the infobox which is not included in the text, particularly a notable doctoral student.
  • Many of these references should have the language added.
  • A lot of the research section is linked to primary sources (the original research articles) - are there reviews or textbooks (secondary sources) that could be cited instead?
  • For the new articles discovered, could there be a bit more context added as far as techniques, applications etc. A table may be beneficial. Secondary sources would be good here as well.

Thank you very much. I will try to work on your suggestions during the next days. --SolidStateHeini (talk) 20:32, 19 April 2019 (UTC)

I tried to include your suggestions. I hope it is better now. --SolidStateHeini (talk) 19:26, 20 April 2019 (UTC)