Talk:Mental exercise

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good article

Poorly written first paragraphs[edit]

There are many other reasons, benefits to exercising including muscle strength, muscle flexibility, nerve signal improvement, etc. This article is poorly written to say the least. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2604:2000:DDD1:4900:B5FC:4ED7:8687:22F9 (talk) 10:00, 10 October 2016 (UTC)

Article needs clean-up[edit]

This article seems like a very rough first draft at best. Jarble (talk) 23:18, 3 September 2011 (UTC) --- this is an awful article. so many unsourced opinions and unexplained arguments - TV sends the brain into a "neutral" state? ALL of it? — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 17:12, 30 June 2012 (UTC)

Why parentheses?[edit]

In the section "Science behind mental exercise", the second sentence reads "Neurons (connect) with other neurons to form a network." Why is (connect) in parentheses? If connect wasn't there, it wouldn't be a complete sentence. --PWNGWN (talk) 15:10, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

Most of this article was written as part of an undergraduate class project, and as with many such articles, parts of it are crap, written by people who were trying to transfer information from sources without really understanding it, and in some cases written by people who seem barely literate. After looking it over, I see that that section was particularly crappy, one false statement after another, so I have removed it. Looie496 (talk) 15:53, 7 May 2013 (UTC)