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I thought your topic was interesting and I think others will too. The only two things I would look out for are sentence structure and repeating the same ideas. I think the Career section is particularly strong but I think it could be made a little more concise. I also added a notes section at the bottom so you can cite any references you used. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kate5405 (talkcontribs) 03:28, 1 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]