Talk:Mohini Bhardwaj

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Edit to "2001 - 2004" Section[edit]

I made major changes to this section and added information, including citations. As it stood previously, I thought parts of it were unclear, and parts of it seemed to be uncomplimentary to the subject (whether intended or not). Furthermore, there was barely a mention - only brief and indirect - of her performance in the 2004 Olympic Games, which is arguably the pinnacle of her gymnastics career and a principal reason making her deserving of an article in the first place. The fact that she was chosen captain of the team is surely worth mentioning, as is the fact that she would have qualified for all-around finals if not for the 2-gymnasts-max-per-team rule. The previous reference to low start values and simple routines was unclear and unsourced, and so I removed it completely. If there's a credible source for that, I suppose it could go back in, though I'm not sure how relevant it is except seemingly as a subtle knock against her as somehow not being world class compared to the other gymnasts there. What's the reason for including it? Jimmyb10 (talk) 08:40, 9 April 2011 (UTC)