Talk:Nobody Knows Me/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:36, 6 April 2013 (UTC)

Info box
  • I'm pretty sure that remix covers for clubs do not count as artwork.
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  • Use the time duration and date templates, like on "S&M (song)" for example
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  • Dance should be before electronic, as D is before E
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  • Remove the A-side and B-side parameters. There aren't any so a bit pointless having them there.
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Lead
  • It was released as a club single in the United States → I don't think labels release songs as "club singles" with the intention of it only being played in clubs. The info box says promotional single, so I think this is what you should go with.
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  • "Nobody Knows Me" carries on the main theme of American Life → Does it? This needs a bit more explanation.
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  • with its concept of "nothing", and is an electronic and dance song, with vocoder effects, spacey synths and a bubbly bass. Lyrically, Madonna rejects tabloid culture's "social disease", denouncing both TV and magazines. → Full stop after "nothing". Join the last bit about genres with the lyrics into one sentence. At the moment, this isn't making sense to me.
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  • who called it as a highlight from American Life → many of whom called it
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  • and also charted on the Australia Club Chart → and peaked at number 49 on the Australian Singles Chart. (I can't find anything on here about an AUS Club CHart and I've never heard of it)
  • Madonna did a solo performance of the song on her Re-Invention World Tour in 2004. → What do you mean solo performance??
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More to come...

Calvin, finish off the review, then I will start addressing them. —Indian:BIO · [ ChitChat ] 09:16, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
I corrected some of them. Jorn talk 16:20, 22 April 2013 (UTC)
You need to provide me with a source for the AUS Club Chart.  — AARONTALK 11:38, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
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Recording and composition
  • at West Hollywood → in West Hollywood
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  • The second and third paragraph can be one.
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  • The source for electronic and dance says "electro-based/dance-oriented". Based and oriented do not make them of the genre, so they need to be removed.
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  • Remove "According to the sheet music published at Sheetmusicplus.com, "
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Critical reception
  • This is just full of really short quote sentences. There is no flow between them at all.
 Done Better now?
References
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Status

On hold  — AARONTALK 11:46, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

Passing  — AARONTALK 09:09, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.