Talk:One Minute/GA1

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Reviewer: Seabuckthorn (talk · contribs) 17:59, 12 February 2014 (UTC)
Nominator: Saulo Talk to Me

Hi! My review for this article will be here shortly. SFriendly.svg --Seabuckthorn  17:59, 12 February 2014 (UTC)


1: Well-written

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      • Major Point 1: Release and composition "The song served as the album's second single in Australia on September 18, 2007 through 19 Recordings and RCA Records. Clarkson originally wrote it for her second studio album, Breakaway (2004), with songwriters Kara DioGuardi, Chantal Kreviazuk and Raine Maida; however, it did not make the final track listing. It was then reworked for My December, being produced by David Kahne, and co-produced by Jason Halbert and Jimmy Messer. "One Minute" is an alternative rock song with electropop influences, and consists of "rapid-fire give-and-take verses."" (summarised well in the lead) Face-smile.svg
      • Major Point 2: Critical response "Upon its release, "One Minute" was met with positive reviews from music critics, with one considering it to be the musical highlight of My December, along with "Never Again" and "Don't Waste Your Time". Following strong radio airplay, the song debuted at number 41 in Australia, reaching its peak of number 36 a week later." (summarised well in the lead) Face-smile.svg
      • Major Point 3: Live performances "No accompanying music video was recorded for the song; however, Clarkson promoted it through few live appearances, including at Daytona 500 on February 2007, and on Take 40's Live Lounge." (summarised well in the lead) Face-smile.svg
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      • Major Point 1: Release and composition "The song served as the album's second single in Australia on September 18, 2007 through 19 Recordings and RCA Records. Clarkson originally wrote it for her second studio album, Breakaway (2004), with songwriters Kara DioGuardi, Chantal Kreviazuk and Raine Maida; however, it did not make the final track listing. It was then reworked for My December, being produced by David Kahne, and co-produced by Jason Halbert and Jimmy Messer. "One Minute" is an alternative rock song with electropop influences, and consists of "rapid-fire give-and-take verses."" (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body) Face-smile.svg
      • Major Point 2: Critical response "Upon its release, "One Minute" was met with positive reviews from music critics, with one considering it to be the musical highlight of My December, along with "Never Again" and "Don't Waste Your Time". Following strong radio airplay, the song debuted at number 41 in Australia, reaching its peak of number 36 a week later." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body) Face-smile.svg
      • Major Point 3: Live performances "No accompanying music video was recorded for the song; however, Clarkson promoted it through few live appearances, including at Daytona 500 on February 2007, and on Take 40's Live Lounge." (the lead gives due weight as is given in the body) Face-smile.svg
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        • ""One Minute" is a song recorded by American recording artist Kelly Clarkson taken from her third studio album, My December (2007)."
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2: Verifiable with no original research

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5: Stable: No edit wars, etc: Yes

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Saulo, I'm glad to see your work here. As per the above checklist there are no issues with the article and it’s a GA. SFriendly.svg

Promoting the article to GA status. SCongratulate.svg --Seabuckthorn  13:18, 15 February 2014 (UTC)