This page seems to be in a pretty good place. Most of the references are active links and the information presented is neutral, thorough, and supported by references. There is a lot about the history and origination of the diet but I think it could use more modern day material. Perhaps a section on the 'popularity of the diet' could be a good addition to the article. I think the article could also benefit from an expansion of the 'health effects' section; subheadings of Positive and Negative Effects would be a nice way to organize it. I think the article might be slightly out of date; it claims there have not been major studies regarding the health effects of a paleo diet, but I'm sure there is relevant research published. The best part of this article is the balance of counter arguments so no one viewpoint is vastly overrepresented. I also think the article does a good job of redirecting people to relevant, similar diets.
--Saritaben (talk) 23:16, 17 March 2018 (UTC)Saritaben
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) 00:22, 3 April 2018 (UTC)
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The bias in this article should be fixed quickly or people who do not read this "Talk Section" may be mislead. First, I must define my intention. I am not "pro-Paleo" or "anti-Paleo." I am pro-science. One MUST NOT fight pseudoscience with more pseudoscience. Taking on a subject with an obvious bias is actually harmful to science.
The writer of this article makes a reference (3) to a book called "Paleofantasy:" by Marlene Zuk. Which gives me concern that this Wikipedia article does not have an unbiased intent.
Problem #1: When you say, "Supporters of the diet mistakenly presuppose that... etc." Telling people what your "opponents" think without a reference, is a standard propaganda tool, however, it is not science.
Instead, if you were to say, "Many supporters say, "__X__.(1)" This is contradicted by a study that says, "__Y___"(2)" This would not show bias.
(1)&(2) = Are references to where you got this information.
Problem #2: This article later goes on to say, "The aspects of the Paleo diet that advise eating fewer processed foods and less sugar and salt are consistent with mainstream advice about diet." This means that the "Mainstream Advice" agrees with aspects of the Paleo diet. Logically, this contradicts calling it a "fad" diet, which the wikipedia article referenced defines as "Without backing by solid science."
Problem #3: The article has several unscientific arguments. For example, saying the theory is "promoted by..." is a standard pseudoscience tactic of dismissing a theory. Who promotes a theory is irrelevant to the discussion of the quality of the theory. This tactic attacks the messenger, not the substance of the theory. One could say, "The Big Bang is promoted by multibillion dollar scholastic institutions selling books and courses." The fact is that, "who" is promoting a theory doesn't make it more or less true. A theory either adheres to the scientific method or it does not. It is irrelevant who promotes it, or even how popular a theory is.
NOTE: The writer of this article also makes a reference to a "promoted book" called, "Paleofantasy:" by Marlene Zuk. Which at best is logically hypocritical.
Problem #4: The article is peppered with unscientific language. One of the many examples of unscientific language includes using the term, "Advocates for the diet" and juxtaposing that with "Others." For example, in the sentence, "Advocates of the diet argue that..., but others have countered that..." The term "Advocates" implies they are biased, while the term, "Others" implies they are just like you and me. If one must define these differences it is better to use equivalent terms, "Advocates" vs. "Opponents." However, it's better to avoid assigning a bias by large groups in the first place. For example, it is appropriate to say, "Adrienne Cognomen wrote..." However, "John Aliacognomen counters this by saying..."
Problem #5: The peer-reviewed references don't make sense or are questionable. In the second paragraph, both references (3) & (4) have problems. Reference (4) is an article on how diet did or did not play a role extinction of Neanderthals. It does not compare paleolithic human diet to modern day diet as the previous sentence implies. And Reference (3) is to the aforementioned book by Marlene Zuk. published by W. W. Norton & Company a NON-peer-reviewed publisher.
If I were to say, "This article sounds like it was written by a troll on a Reddit forum."
I would be both making an unscientific assumption about the writer and referencing a stereotype of a Reddit forum. (Where many articles are written by well mannered and well informed people.)
Integrity is the most important tool in the fight against pseudoscience. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 22.214.171.124 (talk) 20:10, 28 March 2018 (UTC)
- WP:FRINGE and WP:NPOV. Since mainstream science regards this paleo stuff as a load of hooey, Wikipedia reflects that faithfully and does not fall into the WP:GEVAL trap. Alexbrn (talk) 17:22, 29 March 2018 (UTC)
Reply to Alexbrn: The "Problems" I mentioned reference the Wikipedia policy you've highlighted of "Neutrality." Yes, it is "Fringe Science" and one should not give "Equal Equivalency" to these fringe ideas. However, it is vitally important that one does not combat fringe arguments by using false arguments, propaganda techniques, and incorrect references. This is critical thinking thrown into the toilet and it severally degrades the quality of Wikipedia. The article is written like a poor quality science blog or a bad science forum. It may give the writer and reader a smug sense of superiority, but they are false arguments all the same. Giving people a the emotional feeling of smug superiority is not what science is for. This argument style is bad for Wikipedia and bad for science.
The arguments defined in this article are the equivalent to a fringe thinker arguing, "Gravity waves propel space ships." and the reply from an educated scientist is, "You're breath stinks, so that's how much you know." Just because your on the side of the main stream scientist doesn't mean you can accept poor arguments as proof. These types of arguments don't help the cause of science, they don't support Wikipedia guidelines and they make the scientist seem as foolish as fringe thinker. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 126.96.36.199 (talk • contribs) 17:38, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
- I'm not clear you understand the relevant Wikipedia policies. I strongly suggest you simply make requests for changes, clearly identifying independent and reliable references supporting the proposed changes. --Ronz (talk) 19:28, 30 March 2018 (UTC)
- It could start at least to say that it's not a fake diet, but a diet we don't know enough about it, and doesn't exist yet in a correct form. It's just kicking an emotion away, an emotion for people trying to figure out how to remove the high amount of unusual substance in the modern common diet. People do look for a replacement of the current convenience diet, whatever the shop or supermarket sells. Calling the palaeolithic diet inferior to any other diet (which diet?) is snobbish. TudorTulok (talk) 10:08, 31 March 2018 (UTC)
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The article starts with the word "fad" from the beginning and keeps the tone for the entire introductory section. TudorTulok (talk) 10:01, 31 March 2018 (UTC)