Talk:Pierre Gamarra

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Jump to: navigation, search
          This article is of interest to the following WikiProjects:
WikiProject Biography / Arts and Entertainment (Rated C-class)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.
C-Class article C  This article has been rated as C-Class on the project's quality scale.
Taskforce icon
This article is supported by the arts and entertainment work group.
 
WikiProject Children's literature (Rated C-class, Mid-importance)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject Children's literature, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Children's literature on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.
C-Class article C  This article has been rated as C-Class on the project's quality scale.
 Mid  This article has been rated as Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.
 
WikiProject France (Rated C-class)
WikiProject icon This article is within the scope of WikiProject France, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of France on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.
C-Class article C  This article has been rated as C-Class on the project's quality scale.
 ???  This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.
 
edit·history·watch·refresh Stock post message.svg To-do list for Pierre Gamarra:

Here are some tasks awaiting attention:
  • Expand : referencesYes check.svg Done
  • Wikify : datesYes check.svg Done
  • Other :
    Link books in the bibliography with ISBN dataYes check.svg Done
    Make clear what article information comes from what source in the sources sectionYes check.svg Done
    Create a references section for references only and leave the footnotes section for mere explanations (such as books' French original titles or vice-versa)Yes check.svg Done
    pronunciation in French in phonetic alphabetYes check.svg Done

Assessment comment[edit]

To improve the article, the lead should summarize the article per MOS:LEAD. The footnotes are currently explanations and two citations and it is not clear from the sources section what article information comes from what source. The style is sometimes vague and could be more plain ("For a very short time" is unclear, "until the War bursted" - better to explicitly state what war is meant and "bursted" sounds unencyclopedic, could be simply "began"). To the author/authors: I often write articles using other articles on similar topics that I like (or are featured) as templates to save work, perhaps this could work here. Feel free to request a new assessment when you feel the article has improved. Best regards Hekerui (talk) 20:50, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Thank you very much for the assessment and comment. That's most helpful. --Pierre et Condat (talk) 00:53, 24 October 2011 (UTC)

B-class review for WP:BIO[edit]

A review as requested at Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Assessment. This article is around C-class. Unreferenced claims, overall sparse amount of text (French Wikipedia's article is much larger) prevent this from assessed as B-class at this time. Cheers, --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 18:43, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

Hi, Piotrus and thank you very much for the rating and comment. I added some references to address the first issue you raised. Have a nice day.--36.55.136.115 (talk) 21:31, 21 June 2014 (UTC)