Talk:Planoise

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Hi, i am french, i create this page about Planoise, but my english is often bad^^ so if you can, help me... thanks Toufik-de-planoise (talk) 20:49, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

I've been working on the grammar and punctuation. I have a few other suggestions as well. I noticed a lot of wikilinks around dates, like 2008. Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking says to avoid linking dates. Also I noticed some sentences had several footnotes. Sometimes 3 footnotes after one phrase. While making citations is necessary and important, you may not need multiple ones for the same statement, especially if it is a general statement without any controversy. I hope you find the suggestions useful. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:02, 24 October 2011 (UTC)