Talk:Ricardo Arjona/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 13:59, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

Hi! I will review this article. It is by far the longest one I have done, so if any onlookers want to help with the review, that would be fantastic! Thanks. Basilisk4u (talk) 13:59, 12 May 2012 (UTC)

  • Hi! I'll be with you throughout the review process, as i made the article from scratch. --Hahc21 (talk) 15:14, 12 May 2012 (UTC)
    • Basilisk4u, I'm willing to help out with the review. Erick (talk) 22:21, 16 May 2012 (UTC)

Review[edit]

Prose comments[edit]

Continuing review[edit]

So sorry for the delay. I recently had jaw surgery and I have been recovering, please excuse me if I take a long time to respond. I am continuing here as the sections above have gotten a tad messy. Thank you Basilisk4u (talk) 01:55, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

o.0 don't worry!. Now it's me and you. Erick went on vacations and will be out 'til June 16. —Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 02:32, 10 June 2012 (UTC)

Some more points

1990s International breakthrough, Si El Norte Fuera El Sur and Sin Daños a Terceros[edit]

2000–2005: Galería Caribe, world tour, Santo Pecado, hiatus and Adentro[edit]

Another reviewer has brought up the issue that the "Criticism and controversy" section may give undue weight to negative reviews of Arjona. I am not exactly sure how to deal with this issue, so I may need to request a second opinion about this. Thank you for your patience! Basilisk4u (talk) 20:25, 6 July 2012 (UTC)

Haha i moved the section to my sandbox. It really gives a bad impression over Arjona. I'll develop it to be neutral on my sandbox and then re-add it. Since the article has been copyedited, i think there won't be more prose issues... Cheers! —Hahc21 01:39, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
I think I am nearly ready to pass the article. There are not many prose issues I can find, and the only thing I would recommend now is to add more citations in the "Collaborators" section. Basilisk4u (talk) 06:00, 7 July 2012 (UTC)
Awwwww thanks! I'm very happy it finally passed. You deserve a barnstar for your work. Cheers! —Hahc21 16:24, 7 July 2012 (UTC)