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After copy editing the article I removed the 'multiple issues', 'copy editing' and 'tone' tags since I think I've succeeded in fixing these issues, but I'm probably not the best person to judge that. Somebody please let me know if deleting these tags was inappropriate, a breach of 'wiki-etiquette' or whatever.
I also removed the internal links to the words 'computing', 'passwords' and 'electronic communication' because I think we all know what they are. Again, this is a judgement call that may be open to discussion.