Talk:South Park season 13/GA1
GA Review[edit]
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 06:11, 28 February 2010 (UTC)
Hiya, I'll be reviewing this article. I've watched the majority of this season and have been following the episode article's, so I'll have experience with the subject in my review. I also assume this is the ending to a GT? Good luck with it. Now let's start! The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 00:29, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
Lead[edit]
- I think the infobox should be colored to match the image.
- "[...]three new seasons the duo agreed[...]" -> "seasons Parker and Stone agreed"
- Explain why Kanye West was hurt by "Fishsticks," as it isn't said.
Episodes[edit]
- "B.J." and "slutty" seem kinda slang-ish.
- "Meanwhile, Stan attemps to return an expensive drink mixer make him[...]" -> "[...]Stan attempts[...]mixer, which makes him[...]"
- "[...]the issue was about a larger point about women's rights[...]" -> wording here?
- Does hell really need to be wikilinked?
- No ratings info for "Whale Whores," right?
Production[edit]
- Is "supervisor producer" the right wording?
Reception[edit]
Release[edit]
Images[edit]
Final say[edit]
I've decided to pass this article after the following are dealt with:
- The episode table should be colored to match the infobox.
- The "Awards" section should be changed to "Award."
- What exactly does "mini-audio commentary" mean? Is it an audio commentary that plays over the episode, or...?
- They are audio commentaries that play over the episode, but they only last four or five minutes, not the whole episode. From what I understand, Parker and Stone don't like doing them, so they do what they call "mini-commentaries". I tried to make the wording more clear. — Hunter Kahn 02:25, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 00:31, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
Alright, that's a pass! Nice work, Hunter. And I apologize for taking so long. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to vote "yes" on this GTC. :) The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 23:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)