Talk:Superman/Shazam: First Thunder

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Rewrite[edit]

This really needs to be rewritten from scratch. As it is, it glosses over the events of the first three and a half issues of the four-issue series, then goes into an overly-detailed play-by-play for the last nine pages of the last issue. - 67.191.254.83 18:24, 13 March 2007 (UTC)

Plot[edit]

The plot part really shouldn't be that detailed and that full of spoilers. I would condense the section, but it's been a little while since I read the story. Making the section one or two paragraphs would be ideal, imo. Cubzrule (talk) 20:09, 5 March 2008 (UTC)

  • Also, I added a reception section, just so we could add links to the page. If that's not necessary, please go ahead and change/delete the section as necessary. Cubzrule (talk) —Preceding comment was added at 19:55, 5 March 2008 (UTC)