Talk:Territory of the Military Commander in Serbia

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Lead Clean[edit]

The lead needs to be revised to follow Wikipedias guidelines (MOS:LEAD). I will post the appropriate template at the top of the page. DirectAttrition (talk) 19:41, 8 March 2017 (UTC)

Can you explain what it is about the lead that doesn't follow WP:LEAD? Thanks, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:38, 9 March 2017 (UTC)
The lead of article goes into too much detail on some specific aspects. Some of the information in the lead is not included in the body of the article. I feel the information included in the lead could be summarized better. DirectAttrition (talk) 15:50, 22 March 2017 (UTC)