Talk:Terry Brennan

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Informal tone[edit]

Aside from the missing inline citations, the article uses sportscaster jargon like "Brennan got off to a good start", "the Irish slipped a notch" etc. It should be rephrased with more formal language from an uninvolved PoV (see also WP:TONE). GermanJoe (talk) 19:30, 24 April 2016 (UTC)