Talk:The Divine Comedy (Milla Jovovich album)/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Novice7 | Talk 04:43, 14 December 2010 (UTC)

Lead[edit]

  • The lead should summarize the whole article. The first paragraph is not clear enough and is too short.
  • Despite the positive reception, Jovovich has yet to release an official follow-up album – what is its significance here?
  • Third paragraph is confusing.
  • Similar case in fourth para too. Why do you include details of free downloads etc?

Background and production[edit]

  • The photo is a copyright violation.
  • A comma is needed after SBK Records
  • pop star → pop singer. Also, the information about Australian Idol should be removed.
  • Many sentences lack sources.
  • Why are music videos mentioned here?
  • Also, why second album details?

Music and lyrics[edit]

  • ..."Taken from Milla's site" – poor. Remove that. And what is its signifance? Who said it?
  • Her last name is Jovovich. So, use that and not Milla.
  • Why a review in this section?
  • Also needs sources

Release and promotion[edit]

  • This section should go below the Album title and artwork section.
  • Again, a clear copyright violation.
  • Needs copy-editing and also sources.

Album title and artwork[edit]

  • There are lots of unwanted information. Remove them.
  • Source them too.

Reception[edit]

  • Jovovich had to fight for her rights to have her own music released – source?
  • Why some underscores?
  • Again, sources needed. Add {{sic}} wherever needed.

Accolades[edit]

  • Just the addition to Slant Magazine. Can be moved to reception section.
  • Needs copy-editing.

Track listing[edit]

  • Source
  • Is the "Unreleased" section necessary?
  • Also, formats?
  • Credits should be a different section. Its too short. Also, source the credits.

Charts[edit]

  • In her main page, there is a UK chart? Why is it not included? Also, it is US Heatseekers chart.

Release history[edit]

  • Source needed

References and media[edit]

  • Many references need {{cite web}} template.
  • Two copyright violations.
  • I'm sorry. But, this article is definitely not GA material. I'm failing it for now. Novice7 | Talk 04:11, 27 December 2010 (UTC)