Talk:The Harbingers/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:37, 29 December 2010 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

  • I'm concerned about the heavy referencing in the lead. As the lead is supposed to be a summary of the article, references should be minimal, as they would be discussed further and ref'd later. I took one out that wasn't needed, and I'm sure more can be cut.
  • "Players must collect the six Keystones of different colour to win" colours.
  • "Hellin is evil infant trouble-maker" is an evil infant
  • Capitalization varies between Numb skull and Numb Skull. Make it consistent.
  • "Chantraine. and a Numb skull" comma
  • "The Harbingers became one of the top ten best selling games in America and UK, within months of its release." does this mean both Americas or just North?
  • "two booster tapes was released." were

I'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:25, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

  •  Done, thanks for the review. -- d'oh! [talk] 23:56, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

Looks good. One thing I would add, if you can find it, if if there's any release information in Australia, since that's where the game originated. Anyway, I'll pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:40, 4 January 2011 (UTC)