Talk:The Heart of Me (song)

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Review: April 10, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:45, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox[edit]

Needs alt
- Alt added. Not sure it's great though - what animal even is that? Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

A collourful moose. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:43, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead[edit]

the song charted on Billboard's Spotify Viral 50 chart at number 48. → remove see below
- removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Atlantic subsequently sent it → Subsequently, Atlantic Records sent the song (as it is the first mention)
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Background[edit]

(also registered as "Heart of Me" with BMI) → source doesn't work and is it really important? I mean the album credits are much more relevant and have the actual name of the song.
- removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Just a question do you have the name of the studios?
- It's possible the original nominator does. I sadly couldn't find it. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Please mention Kevin Grainger and S. Vaughan Merrick, they are as valuable as the others.
- added. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrics[edit]

In the chorus, Wyatt sings "Look away, take the back door to / The heart of me / Because I can't believe / That anything's cool anymore" → what's the point of this?
- I agree - removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Release[edit]

In the issue dated 12 March 2016 of Billboard, "The Heart of Me" made its chart debut at number 48 on the Spotify Viral 50 chart,[23] which measured the top songs on streaming service Spotify with the most sharing and social activity in the United States. The song was listed on the chart for a week. → irrelevant, it is not a chart that is used in wikipedia. See Billboard Charts.
- Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception[edit]

Add "received generally positive reviews from music critics" → link music critics to musi journalism
- Is this in the lede? I added something to this section saying this. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I would let the "best song of the week" and "best of the year" in a diferent paragraph.
- I'm not sure what this means Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Track listing[edit]

Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the tracks and the lenght of the same.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Credits and personnel[edit]

Same as preivous.
- Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Release history[edit]

Fine

References[edit]

miikesnow.co.uk → Miike Snow official website
- Shouldn't really list it as "official website", but I've changed the publisher to Miike Snow.Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
IMVD is not regarded as a reliable source → replace it
- Removed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Link 1 and 32 are dead
- Link 1 I had removed. 32 was previously cited, so removed. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

External links[edit]

Fine

Overall[edit]

You can now adress the issues I pointed out. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:17, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- Per WT:GAN, I've made the changes above MarioSoulTruthFan Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:09, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: First of all, thank you for responding so quickly. Secondly, I'm aware you are not the nominator and I made some small changes to the article, if you could see if you are ok with them it would help. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:24, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry I haven't been able to address this until now. Looks like Lee has finished the job, thanks! Pancake (talk) 08:55, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

All good with me. Didn't mean to take your thunder ;p Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 18:31, 10 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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