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Is the first name of W. Brown, Jr unknown or is there another reason for use of the initial only?
First name is unknown as far as sources go. —Ed!(talk) 14:50, 12 May 2013 (UTC)
In that case, it is possible that the redlink is not warranted, but that is not for the GAR.
In At 08:30, she altered course to pursue a sound ping on her sonar., I assume that's half past eight in the morning. Perhaps "am" (or "pm") designation would dispel doubts that readers may have regarding this matter?
In The torpedo struck between framed 18 and 24 at about 4 feet (1.2 m) below her water line., I suspect that should be "frames" but I'm not familiar with ship construction, so I'm leaving it for you to correct me or that word.
You're right. Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 14:50, 12 May 2013 (UTC)
In She was also fitted with newer weapons and electronics systems. what were those electronic systems? Just asking out of curiosity.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:59, 11 May 2013 (UTC)
A newer radar. Added that. —Ed!(talk) 14:50, 12 May 2013 (UTC)
Since I found no disagreements with the MOS, i think there are no further issues to address except those already stated.--Tomobe03 (talk) 21:01, 11 May 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for your review! —Ed!(talk) 14:50, 12 May 2013 (UTC)
You are welcome. It was a pleasure and made an interesting reading material. Happy to pass this GAN.--Tomobe03 (talk) 15:03, 12 May 2013 (UTC)