Talk:Untitled EP/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    "Lyrically the record features lyrics about self-refection" - How about "Lyrically the record deals with..." or similar, to avoid repetition
    "The EP was announced on Hodgy Beats' official Twitter account on February 20 2012 " - comma missing
    "It features no production from Odd Future producers," - how about "Unlike in the previous records (if that is true), Odd Future did not contribute in the production" or "Odd Future did not play a role in the production"
    Why is "Plies" in italics?
All corrected.
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    Source of the file: Page not found--Kürbis () 11:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
Corrected
  1. Overall: Hold--Kürbis () 16:54, 10 August 2012 (UTC)
    Pass/Fail:

I believe your concerns have been corrected properly. Bruce Campbell (talk) 20:08, 10 August 2012 (UTC)

I will pass, congrats! Regards.--Kürbis () 20:26, 10 August 2012 (UTC)