Talk:Up All Night: The Live Tour/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 23:42, 20 June 2013 (UTC)

  • One dead link
    • Fixed. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • worked out the video production → Not very encyclopaedic
    • Better? Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • its performance of "Moments → Lacking an end quotation mark
    • Done. 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • I'd suggest using a the certification table like on Music of the Sun or Rated R (Rihanna album) as it has symbols for which countries are based on sales or shipments.
    • I hate working with that table. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
      • It's a lot simpler to use, and more informative.  — AARONTALK 21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • A release history table would be useful. Say UK, US, Australia, and some of Europe.
    • The first section covers that.. It was released worldwide. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • FN2 should use cite web and not cite news, as Hearst Corporation shouldn't be in brackets.
    • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Same for FN3, Viacom shouldn't be in brackets.
    • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Apply this to FN8 and FN9
    • Done Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Status

Although its a short article with only two sections of prose in the main body of text, it is well written. On hold.  — AARONTALK 19:01, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing and the compliment Face-smile.svg. Robin (talk) 19:29, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
Passing.  — AARONTALK 21:00, 21 June 2013 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.