Talk:Vehicle extrication

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Clarity, phrasing, etc[edit]

I did some work to make the phrasing more clear, but didn't have time to address the entire article. I've also notived some redundancy in the Operations section; much of what appears in the last two paragraphs has already been said earlier in that section. Also, though I tried to keep my revisions in International English, I'm more familiar with American English; someone may want to glance at my work to attend to any errors I made. --Badger151 (talk) 18:26, 4 January 2008 (UTC)