Talk:What Lies Ahead/GA1

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Reviewer: Lampman (talk · contribs) 11:36, 15 November 2011 (UTC)

This seems like a perfectly good article – comprehensive and well-referenced. I've tried to make some improvements to the language here and there, please make sure you're ok with these. Just a couple of things I would like to see addressed:

  • The article uses the term "walker" several times, without ever explaining what they are. The word "zombie" is in fact not used once, except for in a review quote. As far as I'm aware, the term "walker" is part of the internal lingo of the "Walking Dead" universe, but it's important that the article is equally accessible to the uninitiated and fans alike.
Yes check.svg DoneDAP388 (talk) 21:33, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
  • "in its respective timeslot" – I'm not quite sure what is meant by "respective" here, shouldn't it just be "in its timeslot"?
Yes check.svg DoneDAP388 (talk) 21:33, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Will check back soon, should be a quick fix. Lampman (talk) 13:29, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I didn't make myself clear, I didn't mean that all references to "walkers" should be changed to "zombies". I simply meant that the term had to be explained. Also I'm not quite sure why "Christ" was changed to "Jesus of Nazareth", which is a less common appellation. I made some changes, see if you're happy with it. Lampman (talk) 20:39, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
Oh, that's what you meant? My apologies. It all looks good. —DAP388 (talk) 00:21, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
Great, promoted! Lampman (talk) 08:40, 21 November 2011 (UTC)