Talk:William Harper (Rhodesian politician)

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April 6, 2016 Good article nominee Listed
May 17, 2016 Featured article candidate Promoted
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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:William Harper (Rhodesian politician)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 13:41, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

I'll review this over the next few days. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:41, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Cheers, hope you enjoy it. —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:49, 2 April 2016 (UTC)

Checklist[edit]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments[edit]

Images
  • All look appropriate, the fair use one is legit.
Early life
  • "During 1940 he was one of "The Few"—the Allied pilots of the Battle of Britain, in which he flew with No. 17 Squadron and was wounded in action." I know what you're saying here, but it might be more easily understood if broken into two sentences.
  • I've redone this whole bit, hope it's okay now. —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:30, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
Dominion Party
  • "... the opposition Dominion Party (which called for full "dominion" or Commonwealth realm status)." What was the other party's position?
  • The governing United Federal Party also aspired to Commonwealth realm status, but the Dominion Party were more radical—kind of like the Conservatives and UKIP in today's British politics. —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:30, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

That's it. Not much in need of fixing here. I'm looking forward to promoting it. Thanks for writing another good Rhodesia article. --Coemgenus (talk) 16:42, 6 April 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for reviewing this and for the kind words. I've replied to each point above. I've expanded the RAF service part quite a bit, maybe have another look to be sure. I'm glad you seem to have enjoyed the article. Cheers, —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:30, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
It all looks good and I'm glad to pass it. --Coemgenus (talk) 20:54, 6 April 2016 (UTC)
Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it. Cheers, —  Cliftonian (talk)  07:14, 7 April 2016 (UTC)