Talk:Xeros Washing Machine

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NPOV dispute introduction/"Inventor/Developer"[edit]

This article, especially the introduction, sounds more like a marketing piece than an encyclopedic article. References are made to marketing terms, (such as "the Washing Machine" when referring to the Xeros), vague references are made to benefits with enthusiastic language without references (such as "These beads are small and super absorbent which allows them to go through clothing to absorb dirt and stains"), and the article boasts many benefits of the product while not mentioning much history or any cons of the technology. The article needs to be edited to maintain a neutral point of view, reflecting information publicly available, history of development, and pros and cons of the device, as in many other technology articles (such as Ipod or Playstation). Dantiston (talk) 01:04, 29 December 2013 (UTC)

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