Template:Did you know nominations/18th Arizona Territorial Legislature

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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 22:59, 2 October 2012 (UTC)

18th Arizona Territorial Legislature[edit]

Created/expanded by Allen3 (talk). Self nom at 23:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svgThe article itself is okay, but the hook might benefit from some attention. The overly formal vocabulary dilutes its hooky interest. Most of our readers probably won't known what an appropriation bill is, for instance. I think it could be rephrased to make it a bit easier to understand and attract attention. Abyssal (talk) 15:40, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
  • How about:
ALT1: ... that because of how the 18th Arizona Territorial Legislature adjourned, they failed to authorize payment of territorial debts for the next two years? --Allen3 talk 16:09, 25 September 2012 (UTC)
Pictogram voting keep.svgGreat! Abyssal (talk) 15:31, 2 October 2012 (UTC)