Comment: 24x expansion — 4048 characters, by my count, as opposed to 164 in the existing page.
5x expanded by Nyttend (talk). Self nom at 17:05, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
Length (>5x), date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lead paragraphs have a ref; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent paraphrasing issues. QPQ done. Interesting hook; hook length is fine. GTG. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:48, 31 January 2013 (UTC)