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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 4meter4 (talk) 02:58, 6 December 2015 (UTC)

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Magellan Shrine[edit]

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Magellan Shrine
Magellan Shrine

5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 05:15, 21 November 2015 (UTC).

  • Article is long enough and was sufficiently expanded. The hook is cited and interesting. The article is neutral and does not plagiarize. I've clarified the punctuation on the hook a little (added a comma, deleted an extra space) but it looks good to go to me! Fuzchia (talk) 00:18, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
  • This article needs copyediting for English grammar before it can appear on the main page. Note unintelligible sentences such as: However, inspire of this warning Datu Lapu-Lapu, one of the leader of indigenous people opposed the control of Spain over the Islands. I started to correct a bunch of typos in one section, and found a sentence that ended without the final word (I tagged it). Yoninah (talk) 00:52, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Thanks Yoninah. Copy editing done. Hope it is adequate.Nvvchar. 02:13, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Restoring tick per Fuzchia's review. Yoninah (talk) 11:17, 25 November 2015 (UTC)
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