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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 19:49, 9 July 2013 (UTC)

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Music of Tokelau[edit]

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5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk), Rosiestep (talk), Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 16:57, 30 June 2013 (UTC).

  • interesting, well sourced, and no, I didn't know any of it. I find the hook missing something, for example who is going to click on a piped "song"? I also see other possibilities (mako), look around. I would reword the present one as:
ALT1: ... that in the music of Tokelau, pehe refers to songs? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 13:10, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Pate drum

  • "can include" sounds as week as possible to me. What do you think of the lead:
ALT3: ... that the music of Tokelau is dominated by communal singing in harmony, with percussive accompaniment including log drums called pate (pictured)? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:07, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT3 hook is fine with us.--Nvvchar. 06:13, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
an independent reviewer for the hook please, otherwise from me, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:22, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
  • Reiterating need for the independent reviewer, and to keep this from showing up as approved on the queue page until ALT3 is reviewed. Struck earlier, unapproved hooks; I don't know whether ALT1 is still desired; if so, it also needs reviewing. BlueMoonset (talk) 07:35, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT1 is not desirable, also it is simply the original hook without the pipe link, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:53, 5 July 2013 (UTC)
  • ALT3 is suitably referenced and the other DYK criteria are met. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:56, 9 July 2013 (UTC)
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