Template:Did you know nominations/Ravinder Singh (author)

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:37, 31 December 2011 (UTC)

Ravinder Singh (author)[edit]

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~~... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident?~~
ALT ... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident five days before they were to be engaged?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Why This Kolaveri Di

Created by Ansumang (talk). Self nom at 13:17, 18 December 2011 (UTC)

Only 1213 characters of "readable prose". Needs at least 1500. Other checks not performed. --Allen3 ^talk 20:44, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Now 1796 characters. Thanks for reviewing. -- ɑηsuмaη ^{ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ} 08:11, 24 December 2011 (UTC)

Passing comment. I think linking "writer" and "girlfriend" is overlinking. Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:16, 26 December 2011 (UTC)

They should preferably be delinked, yes. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:32, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

(←) Done, now please do a final review. -- ɑηsuмaη ^{ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ} 08:58, 27 December 2011 (UTC)

Hook: This would probably draw more hits: ALT ... that Ravinder Singh became a writer after he lost his love in an accident five days before they were to be engaged?

Article: Long enough, new enough. Needs a copyedit; lots of missing articles and particles. Referencing is poor (quotes need references, all of them... and even then they are probably better at Wikiquote; also, two sentences need references).

Summary:

Needs more work. Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:32, 28 December 2011 (UTC)

You should also work a bit on paraphrasing. For example, this and this have a bit too close paraphrasing. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:32, 29 December 2011 (UTC)

Thanks a lot for the ALT and correcting the grammar. Few matched phrases are reference title and few I don't know how to alter. I think now it is good to go. -- ɑηsuмaη ^{ʈ ᶏ ɭ Ϟ} 06:14, 29 December 2011 (UTC)

ALT1 good to go. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:22, 31 December 2011 (UTC)