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Reema Juffali

Juffali at Oulton Park in 2019
Juffali at Oulton Park in 2019
Juffali in her F4 car at Thruxton Circuit, 2019
Juffali in her F4 car at Thruxton Circuit, 2019

Created by Abishe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:03, 2 December 2019 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go, long enough (just), new enough, well-cited and hook directly cited. I suspect this article will grow over time, as her career has only just started. Prefer Alt1. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:03, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
Sorry:

Symbol question.svg Hello! Your submission of Reema Juffali at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:10, 3 December 2019 (UTC), is there a QPQ required here? I can't tell. Maury Markowitz (talk) 15:10, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

I created this article to contribute to the Asian Month/2019. Well I am looking to make the adjustments as mentioned above. Abishe (talk) 15:35, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg QPQ done, good to go. Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:24, 5 December 2019 (UTC)

Have you considered adding the image of the car? It's CC-by-SA so that's usable, and I think it would definitely end up in the upper spot. Maury Markowitz (talk) 02:25, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
Will it be possible to include that image in the main page if nominated. I can consider adding that instead of the person's image. File:F4 Thruxton Test Day 17-04-2019 57.jpg. Abishe (talk) 07:12, 5 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The QPQ is not a full review. And ALT1 uses the word "first" too many times. I think ALT0 is good, just needs to be trimmed of all the dates. Yoninah (talk) 11:53, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
Better to use ALT0 because that is the main hook to be nominated. So I just removed the alternate sentence. Thank you. I also removed the phrase regarding the ban being lifted against women in Saudi Arabia to drive in September 2017 Abishe (talk) 12:46, 6 December 2019 (UTC)
@Abishe: I have restored the thread, labeling your new hook ALT0a. In future, please do not edit hooks but place new ones at the bottom of the thread, so other editors and promoters can follow the discussion. Yoninah (talk) 16:28, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT0a is okay, but I would suggest this tweak:
  • ALT0b: ... that Reema Juffali (pictured) is the first Saudi Arabian woman to obtain a racing license and to compete in an international racing event held in the kingdom?
  • You have two freely-licensed images here, which I think would add a lot to this hook, so I've added them to the nomination. Yoninah (talk) 16:51, 7 December 2019 (UTC)
Sorry for the late response here. Thank you so much for the modification of the blurbs. I have made some careless mistakes by editing the hooks. Abishe (talk) 01:34, 8 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Restoring tick for ALT0b per Maury Markowitz's review. Yoninah (talk) 01:58, 8 December 2019 (UTC)