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Article Problems

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Lead Section

  • More intro than summary
  • Too much information
  • Not concise; doesn’t overview topic
  • Needs images
  • Only 1 citation
  • Page title not in first sentence
  • Link to WWII & art sooner
  • More encyclopedic

Layout Problems

  • Sections are in confusing order
  • Suggested new sections:
    • Destruction of Art
    • War-Inspired Art
    • Artists in the War
  • Within new sections, there can be more accessible subsections (with info in current sections)

Content Problems

  • Original research/personal essay style needs to be altered (especially in first section)
  • Needs more images throughout article
  • Add more citations throughout
  • Style needs to be more neutral


Lead Problems

  • Good lead overall
  • Last paragraph unnecessary (can be a section later on)
  • Needs info box

Layout Problems

  • Not sure if the lists and lists of books is necessary for this specific article (separate page?)
  • Not enough subsections
  • Development & Approach sections could potentially be combined (Concept & Creation?)
  • New section about publication history (move Translations section & other content here)
  • Add Awards as a subsection in the Reception section

Content Problems

  • The excessive Reception section needs to be condensed.
  • Some copyediting required throughout – grammar, spelling, style, tone, and similar errors.
  • Original research/personal essay style & subjective tones need to be altered


Lead Problems

  • Needs more in the info box
  • Needs images
  • Needs more information in lead paragraph to be considered a summary

Layout Problems

  • Too much time spent on character descriptions (new page for characters?)
  • Missing a number of sections on series creation, reception, publication history, etc.

Content Problems

  • Some copyediting required throughout – grammar, spelling, style, tone, and similar errors.
  • References need to be added in a majority of the character analyses.
  • Some excessive and unnecessary details need to be condensed.
  • More general info about the book series, in general, needs to be added.

Potential Articles to Edit

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Articles Needing Improvement

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  • Article flagged as needing more citations
  • Article needs to be verified
  • Article is lacking quite a bit of content
  • Article flagged as needing changes in tone
  • Article seems to casual
  • Article's layout needs to be reorganized