User talk:Adamng926

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[UGBA 39E] Alex's Introduction[edit]

Hi Adam!

I hope you're doing well. By way of introduction, my name's Alex. I am a second-year student intending to double major in Business Administration and Data Science. Here at Cal, I am extremely passionate in business, student government, and service. In my free time, I love going to the gym, playing basketball, vibing to different types of music, trying new things and spending time with friends and family. Other than that, in the future, I hope to one day start my own business related to giving back to communities in need. I'm looking forward to taking UGBA 39E and learning how we can improve tech and business to make the world a better place. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Alex K. Tran (talk • contribs) 22:04, 3 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

[UGBA 39E] Mervi’s intro[edit]

Hi Adam! Nice to meet you. My name is Mervi, and I am a second year studying Business and Global Studies. On campus, I am involved in the ASUC and a professional business fraternity. I hope to join AFX this semester again as I really enjoy dancing for fun. I am excited to be taking this course with you and getting a chance to further discuss the material. Mervitan (talk) 22:45, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Feedback on Article from Melissa Wang[edit]

I think the overall article was sufficiently updated and revised by Adam. After reading this article, I was certainly surprised upon how he was able to detect some parts of bias in the original article because when I was reading it through, I honestly didn't really detect it. He did a good job on focusing what parts needed to be fixed in order to have an impartial view of digital citizenship, so that readers like me would not inherently have a sense of persuasion from the article. I agree that the technology would be further expanded into and I appreciate how he was able to acknowledge some of the conflicting viewpoints found in the Talk page. I think Adam did a very good job in incorporating what we had learned in class on top of how digital citizenship could be impacted across the contemporary community. The sources he added on top were also much more recent, and he did a decent job of finding academic journals or books. Melissawwang (talk) 06:51, 16 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]