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Removing cover letter URL + text[edit]


Thanks for letting me know you removed the URL from from the Wikipedia Cover-letter page. I am also missing a piece of text I added. Because of that I wanted to add the website as a source but don't know how to do that in a way that is sustainable. Could you please help me with that?

The text that I am missing / was removed: <Copyvio removed>


Rudy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Excellentletter (talkcontribs) 11:02 pm, Today (UTC−5)

@Excellentletter: Hello. I'm sorry, because I doubt this is the answer you were looking for, but the website does not satisfy our external links or reliable source guidelines. Therefore, the link isn't appropriate for Wikipedia. Additionally, if you are affiliated with the site, you should consider reading WP:COI. The text was copied directly from the site, so that constituted a copyright violation and also had to be removed. Apparition11 Complaints/Mistakes 04:21, 30 April 2018 (UTC)


The Takuli's are the royal Rajputs of kiccha district of Udham Singh nagar (Uttrakhand).Basically they are very rich by so many years they are also called NAMBARDARS in UTTRAKHAND by many years. THE TAKULI'S and few other CASTES like JOSHI. NEGI. BISHT. RAWAT are all known as ROYAL RAJPUTS because they still have too much money. In older times all the people of Himachal Pradesh, Jammu and Kashmir were afraid of these 5 castes because they have too much money power as they control all the government officers of Uttrakhand. Now a days all 5 castes majority donates there income to all the needy people's of uttrakhand and help the government to maintain the state uttrakhand ( DEV BHOOMI). good. — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 16:31, 21 June 2018 (UTC)

Um, you need reliable sources and a lot of copy editing for that to be appropriate for an article. Apparition11 Complaints/Mistakes 04:49, 22 June 2018 (UTC)

Wiki page[edit]

Hello what are point for create Company wiki page

help me my frd — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 11:30, 26 June 2018 (UTC)

Hello. For a company to have an article, it needs to pass WP:GNG and WP:CORP. You may want to read WP:1ST for a decent guide to writing your first article. Apparition11 Complaints/Mistakes 23:56, 26 June 2018 (UTC)


Further to my update and your subsequent removal .

I must admit I was a little confused with who posted what I now see that it is you .. I apologize

The IP issue is constantly being confused and although I agree WiKI is not a format for advertising .. It must be mentioned as relevant.

If you think it a form or promotion you are not right .. it is a form of update to relevant times .

If you feel inclined to re write it by all means do .. but it really must be added in some way .


James — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 03:26, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

@ Yes, I have quite a bit of Wikipedia experience time wise and article wise; however, that article is as poor of quality as I have seen. The article as a whole is a mess, these edits are just making it worse. The IP section you added is poorly sourced/unsourced. You need reliable, third party sources. Quotes like "ONIX GB still have the same design ethos for all of its products, working with obsolescence removed from the equation of design ." and "ONIX DNA carried on with these traditions believing that there is no substitute for time in creating perfection ." are not encyclopedic and promotional. Content needs to be reliable sourced and NPOV. Apparition11 Complaints/Mistakes 11:40, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

James you clearly do not have sufficient knowledge of the relevance to this company of IP rights and its history to it ... I suggest you search other IP rights postings in other articles before you attack this one .

The world has changed and IP rights from virtually every company are compromised and mentioning the fights that companies have with them is both relevant and valid .. and is not promotional .. In fact I was sold false product and fake product from others using this companies name .. so please tell me how that is promotional and not factual — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 23:39, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

Why don't you take the time to read this ... .. note the source — Preceding unsigned comment added by (talk) 23:43, 27 June 2018 (UTC)

@ My name is not James. You do not seem to understand how Wikipedia works. We need published, third party sources with a history of fact checking. What you posted there is a primary source. I posted direct quotes of promotion. If you do not believe they are promotional, then Wikipedia may not be the best place for your writing style. The entire article reads more like a company about us page than an encyclopedia article. Are you affiliated with Onix? If so, you should not be editing the article directly due to a conflict of interest. Apparition11 Complaints/Mistakes 05:12, 28 June 2018 (UTC)