User talk:Azradon

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fair Stone (December 12)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately evidence the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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Primefac (talk) 21:36, 12 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

February 2015[edit]

Welcome to Wikipedia. I noticed that your username, "FairStoneLabel", may not meet Wikipedia's username policy because as a company name it implies shared use. If you believe that your username does not violate our policy, please leave a note here explaining why. As an alternative, you may ask for a change of username, or you may simply create a new account for editing. Thank you. Primefac (talk) 16:42, 16 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fair Stone (March 20)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tokyogirl79 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 09:23, 20 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Azradon, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 09:23, 20 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fair Stone (April 14)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Millermk was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fair Stone and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Millermk (talk) 07:43, 14 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fair Stone (July 7)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms, that are designed to promote or show-off the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Fair Stone and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:17, 7 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Fair Stone has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Fair Stone. Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 03:28, 21 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

— Hi DGG, thanks alot for your detailed input. Makes it easier to adjust the article for a renewed submission. I have condensed the article as suggested, removed all but one bullet point list, cleaned up the duplications in the external links as well as added title translations for newspaper articles. Where do you still see room for improvement? I will leave you a short notice on your talk page.

Kind regards, Azradon

Azradon (talk) 08:40, 21 July 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Fair Stone (August 4)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

Many of the previous brought up issues have not been addressed.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 20:08, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Fair Stone has a new comment[edit]

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Fair Stone. Thanks! Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 07:13, 25 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]