User talk:Barbaro Montiel

This user is a student editor in Florida_International_University/Narratives_of_Medicine,_Health_and_Healing_(Spring_2019) .

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This user is a student editor in Florida_International_University/Narratives_of_Medicine_Health_and_Healing_(Fall_2018) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:52, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Intern: A Doctor's Initiation moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Intern: A Doctor's Initiation, is written in a manner which is far too promotional and needs to be rewritten in a more encyclopedic fashion. You should avoid promotional statements like "[the book] is a story unlike those in other books in the medical-memoir genre", and the reception section should not be a series of pull-quotes from the articles. Right now it reads like something that I might find on the back jacket of a book itself. I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. _signed,Rosguill ^talk 08:20, 21 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Intern: A Doctor's Initiation (March 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Promotional in tone "a story unlike those in other books in the medical-memoir genre" "this book refers to the contemporary age of medical education and practice." "Intern is a key counterpoint to medical tradition, a modern voice from the bottom of the trenches" and far too many quotes full of trumpery.

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Theroadislong (talk) 14:52, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Barbaro Montiel! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Theroadislong (talk) 14:52, 20 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Intern: A Doctor's Initiation

Hello, Barbaro Montiel. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Intern: A Doctor's Initiation".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! CptViraj (📧) 14:27, 1 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]