User talk:Brett Birnbaum

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I really liked the edits you made to this article as a group. You added a lot of important information to the article that is very useful to readers, but also kept it simple and easy to read. By adding the sections, "Dangers of Twitterbots," "How to Spot a Twitterbot," and "Examples of Twitterbots," you greatly enhanced the value of this article. All of your edits are also concise and user friendly. Wikipedia articles can often get cumbersome, overwhelming, and difficult to read, but you made sure readers can get the information they need very easily by using simple but informative and effective language. The examples you used to explain the dangers of Twitterbots does an excellent job at illustrating the point you are trying to make. The examples of Twitterbots also provided a lot of interesting information that keeps the reader engaged throughout the entire article. However, there are some aspects that can be improved. For example, the sections you added can have more detail. Further explanation as to how Twitterbots can be dangerous and actually cause damage one's Twitter account or even their computer or cell phone would be helpful. Also, a more specific and detailed explanation of how to spot a Twitterbot would give readers a more detailed idea of what to look out for rather than just a general idea. Finally, the in the examples section, explaining the negative effects of theses specific Twitterbots would give readers more insight into real-life examples that actually caused problems for Twitter users. Overall, you made excellent edits, and with just a few minor adjustments, this article can be taken to the next level.

Brett Birnbaum (talk) 04:26, 25 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]