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Star Wars drafts[edit]

What do we need to move forward with your Star Wars drafts? --Gonnym (talk) 11:44, 26 September 2018 (UTC)

@Gonnym: If we are all good with the way they are split up and structured, then we can starting filling in the prose of the films draft, then the tv series draft, and then the franchise overview draft. - Brojam (talk) 14:14, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
Well, 3 out of the 4 participants of the discussion have commented on your draft and were in favor. Only UpdateNerd has not done so, but did see it, as he's been editing the article itself. --Gonnym (talk) 19:19, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
@Gonnym: Alright. Then, work on finishing up the prose of these drafts can begin! How do you think we should proceed? I don't have too much time so maybe you can take a stab at completing the individual film sections, making sure we don't go too much into production details. I'll work on the other parts of that draft and then check what you've done. - Brojam (talk) 04:46, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
Sure, I'll do that. --Gonnym (talk) 07:41, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
Take a look at the first film's draft - Draft:List of Star Wars films#Star Wars (1977) and let me know if this is the direction, so I'll know how to focus on the next films. --Gonnym (talk) 09:50, 28 September 2018 (UTC)
@Gonnym: Okay, I've gone ahead and trimmed it. Not sure if I trimmed it a bit too much, but wanted to keep only the major production details. Only thing really missing is the casting of the main trio, but I wasn't sure how to write it since I can't find when they were actually cast. - Brojam (talk) 21:29, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
Yeah, the film article didn't have that info so I didn't add it myself. --Gonnym (talk) 21:54, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
Also, please don't revert if you are just going to restore 90% of what I added. That's not how a revert button works. Secondly, MOS Accessibility should be followed and proper scope usage with it, so not sure why you even reverted that. --Gonnym (talk) 21:56, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
Sorry, I reverted to remove the bold of those specific tables to follow List of Marvel Cinematic Universe films, not realizing you had also added the scope="row". - Brojam (talk) 22:17, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
That can be done with the use of "plainrowheaders". That article uses the row signage incorrectly per Help:Table#Pipe syntax tutorial. --Gonnym (talk) 22:21, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

Separate question, how are you with references at the bottom instead of in the article? I personally would like to put them all down but don't want to start doing that and getting reverted. --Gonnym (talk) 22:02, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

I'm all for that. - Brojam (talk) 22:17, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

I found an ebook version of The Making of Star Wars but the ebook doesn't have page numbers and I can't manage to find an online version of this book with numbers. I've already marked in the file casting and filming dates and other development info. --Gonnym (talk) 21:42, 2 October 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Battles Lost and Won[edit]

Hi, what is wrong with my article? You've moved it back from the mainspace without giving details. It has more content than similar articles o I'm happy for it to be moved into mainspace. Matt14451 (talk) 21:14, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

@Matt14451: Adding two more review scores doesn't make it ready for mainspace. Apart from the three review scores, you are adding nothing new. The synopsis is a straight copy and paste of the one at List of Supergirl episodes and there's absolute no production info. - Brojam (talk) 21:22, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
@Brojam: What do you recommend I add? I also added categories, more ratings, guest stars, etc. As I said there are similar articles already in the mainspace with similar content. Matt14451 (talk) 21:25, 29 September 2018 (UTC)
Add production info. Similar to Pilot (The Flash)#Production and expand the plot and critical reception sections. - Brojam (talk) 21:36, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Supergirl (season 2)[edit]

Brojam, can you please help expand it further if you think it isn't yet worth being in the mainspace? The least you could do is dump sources (like you did on all the Flash drafts) while I expand from them. I have already solved one issue raised by Alex, "The Production section needs a great deal of expanding". His another concern is "Broadcast has one sentence", but I don't know what else to add. If you don't have the time to help, never mind. But can I move the draft using G6? Because I find it very-much worthy of being in the mainspace in its current state, maybe others can expand it later. --Kailash29792 (talk) 18:46, 1 October 2018 (UTC)

I'll have a look at what I can find, but it will take me a few days. - Brojam (talk) 02:29, 2 October 2018 (UTC)
Both Matt and AussieLegend are now in favour of the draft entering the mainspace, unlike how Alex and you were on 21 September. Still the overall consensus is not in my favour, as its a 50-50 position. Have you read the draft (which has since been revamped) and changed your view? If so, please write your updated view on Talk:List of Supergirl episodes so that I get a feeling the consensus is getting somewhere. --Kailash29792 (talk) 05:51, 9 October 2018 (UTC)

Thank you[edit]

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Thanks for helping with splitting the Arrowverse nav-boxes! Matt14451 (talk) 15:47, 14 October 2018 (UTC)