User talk:Cnilep

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You might wish to see this Talk:Han_Chinese#RfC_on_inclusion_of_numbers_of_Chinese_people as it involves the page Chinese people. I forgot to inform you earlier. Regards, --Lemongirl942 (talk) 18:49, 16 October 2016 (UTC)

Request to review Syntactic Structures[edit]

Hello, I have been working on this article on and off for a long time. I would be happy if you took some time to read the article and gave me some feedback so that I can improve it in terms of content, language, tone, neutrality, precision, concision, etc. Thanks in advance. Zaheen (talk) 08:29, 9 November 2016 (UTC)

Hi again, thank you very much for your review of the article! It has been very helpful. I have followed it up with revisions. I think have addressed most of the issues you have raised in your review. I have mentioned what I did in the talk page. Could you please take a quick look again and let me know if there are other areas of improvement? Zaheen (talk) 20:05, 26 November 2016 (UTC)

In general, I think you've done a good job addressing issues I raised. I wonder if three sections – Rhetorical style, Reception, and Criticisms – are really different enough to require separation? But on the other hand, having all that information in one section would likely be overwhelming. At any rate, I don't suppose I have much additional criticism at the moment. Happy editing, Cnilep (talk) 02:02, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
Thank you again for all your comments. I'm glad that you liked the changes. As for the organization of the sections, I think they are different enough to warrant their current arrangement. Also, as you said, it keeps the length of sections balanced. As you have no additional criticism, do you think I should nominate the article for GA status at this stage? Zaheen (talk) 08:27, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
Just to add to my rationale of keeping separate sections on those three things : I actually tried to partially follow the organization of the article On the Origin of Species, a featured article where there are separate sections (or subsections) on the book's literary style, on its reception and finally on challenges to Darwin's theory. Zaheen (talk) 11:36, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

I think a Good Article nomination might be a good way to get additional feedback and move forward toward Featured Article status. Best wishes, Cnilep (talk) 01:05, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

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