User talk:Deli nk
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Hi, thank's for reviewing the external links i posted.
I was not pretty sure if they all gonna fit, but i was 100% for the castleville one.
So i think it should be taken back, users would love external link to the game guides.
- Personally, I don't think it's appropriate. If you disagree, you can use the talk page to suggest adding the link to the article and see what other editors think. Deli nk (talk) 10:45, 2 June 2015 (UTC)
Hi Deli nk,
Regarding the curl on my recent revision to the previous version of the PSMD, there were some issues with the information, some gaps, and ambiguities, and improperly referenced/lack of scientific references. I have modified, and referenced anything that may be seen as "promotional." I also made the language more formal and objective for the purpose of neutrality.
Edit: I have added references, and made the tone more neutral overall. I cited Lyle McDonald as previously described on wikipedia here: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Protein_Sparing_Modified_Fast "The wiki page says that PSMF recommends 1 - 1.5 grams of protein per kilogram. I don't know the source of this but, it should be 1 - 1.5 grams per lean body mass in pounds, not kilograms according to Lyle Mcdonald's rapid fatloss book. So in order to know how much proteïne an individual should take, he should know his lean body mass at front. Then multiply this with 2.2 in order to know this in pounds. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 184.108.40.206 (talk) 13:05, 2 December 2012 (UTC)"
Hope this resolves any issues in the article.
Best, Tom Hickey