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Contents
- 1 La-Chun Lindsay
- 2 submitting on behalf of another user
- 3 Maxmoefoe page
- 4 Ref: Seema Bhatnagar
- 5 Kendall Vertes
- 6 New Page Patrol
- 7 Request on 11:12:09, 29 October 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by JennS2018
- 8 Ron S. Jarmin
- 9 Thank you
- 10 Need help for further editing
- 11 Hi
- 12 Not hurrasment
- 13 A barnstar for you!
- 14 Incomplete DYK nomination
- 15 Your submission at Articles for creation: Holly Farrell has been accepted
- 16 Please undelete HPEV Solar Fuel Cell article.
- 17 Rollback
- 18 Re: Suriname at the CONCACAF Gold Cup
- 19 ValentinaLombardo
- 20 A barnstar for you!
- 21 I'll move the links for Desert Gold
- 22 Copyvio
- 23 Revdel request
- 24 Article Submit - Musician
- 25 Speedy deletion contested: Genevieve Clarke
- 26 Ways to improve Mount Dora High School
- 27 A page you started (Dorothy Jean Hailes) has been reviewed!
- 28 WP:RM/TR and page mover right
- 29 Ref: Nizar El Fakih
La-Chun Lindsay[edit]
Thanks for the name swap - you are fast I had just noticed it and was trying to figure out how to change it. BW Nejaby (talk) 19:55, 16 October 2018 (UTC)
submitting on behalf of another user[edit]
You can put a user= parameter in the submit template. This will cause the review notices to go the user you designate rather than to you. Maybe you already knew this and just forgot in the case of Draft:Pierre O'Rourke, in which case I apologize for the unneeded advice. — jmcgnh(talk) (contribs) 02:50, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
@Jmcgnh: Yeah I made an error with the submitting. I won't let it happen again. Thanks for the feedback. JC7V-constructive zone 03:00, 17 October 2018 (UTC)
Maxmoefoe page[edit]
Hey, I just made a page for maxmoefoe on my sandbox but I seem to be having trouble submitting it. Could you possibly read through it and see if there’s any issues, since you seem to active on other YouTuber’s articles and this is my first one. Thanks. Ducktech89 (talk) 11:32, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
- Ducktech89 I've move it into draft space (but it's not submitted yet for review). The problem with your draft is there are youtube and twitter sources in it and those are unreliable sources (and primary sources to boot). Please read WP:RS for what sources you can use and read WP:RSP for what sources you can't use. You should find sources from newspapers, books, magazines in particular. The wrestling
sectiondraft sources are fine but maybe a few more up there wouldn't hurt. When you've fixed these issues, I'll submit it for you. JC7V-talk 15:28, 22 October 2018 (UTC)
I’ve tried to find reliable sources, but I can’t find many. I mainly just used things Max has said and used those as sources, but there’s no completely stable source stating where he's from, his age just Wikitubia and things of the like. I just had to sort of connect the dots. Ducktech89(talk) 12:05, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
- Ducktech89 Hello, for Maxmoefoe, on google search there are some references from reliable sources you can use for the draft on him but they are mostly of the passing mention variety (which doesn't establish notability). And another reference to him from the Daily Mail which as a source is blacklisted. If you can't find reliable sources to show that he meets WP:V or to show he meets WP:GNG or any of its sub categories, it means he unfortunately isn't notable enough (at least now) for inclusion. To see what type of sources you need for the Maxmoefoe , see Jenna Marbles's article. She is also a youtuber like Maxmoefoe and yet her article clearly shows notability and the sources provided meet WP:V. Good luck and you are on the right track. I've also split the drafts into two separate drafts since you had Dave Finley III and Max's draft together as one draft which is against policy (I missed that during the user space to draft move). JC7V-talk 00:51 (updated), 23 October 2018 (UTC)
What I'm trying to get at is if Maxmoefoe is trurly notable enough for inclusion, you should be able to find some reliable sources to backup things like where he's from and his age (for the most part.). Check out PewDiePie's article. There is a Washington Post reference to his dad's job, a Rolling Stone reference about his childhood etc. It maybe a case of too soon for Max. JC7V-talk 00:55, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
- Ducktech89 Also see WP:NOYT, you can use youtube or Twitter as sources rarely and under very specific circumstances, so balance that advice with the advice above I gave you. Good luck. JC7V-talk 18:33, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
Ref: Seema Bhatnagar[edit]
Hello,
There are 2 scientist by the name of Seema Bhatnagar. This one is based out of India, and is in the field of Drug Discovery. here research data is available on https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Seema_Bhatnagar2.
The other one is based is US, and currently working with the Children Hospital in Philadelphia, United States. Her research data is available on https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Seema_Bhatnagar3.
Please do not add here data to this profile, as can create problems to both of them.
Thanks you, — Preceding unsigned comment added by A1bhatna (talk • contribs) 03:22, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reply. I replied to this on your talk page. Happy editing. JC7V-talk 03:31, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
Kendall Vertes[edit]
Hi! This is the first time I've worked on a wikipage, and I was wondering what your deletion reason meant. What is "create portected"? I'd love to create this page if possible. Thanks!--Ameliemacp (talk) 05:24, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
New Page Patrol[edit]
Hi there,
I got your email and I'm happy to help. While we don't really have a school as such, I'd be happy to help with any questions you might have. I'm available via chatting on my talkpage of course, and I'm also often on the NPP discord channel ([1]). Your CSD log does look quite good, and I think if you went to PERM right now you'd be approved on that alone, so feel free to apply whenever. I'd suggest checking out the list of gadgets and scripts located here: Wikipedia_talk:New_pages_patrol/Reviewers#Full_recommended_gadget/script_list and installing them, as they are quite useful to NPP and AfC, both before and after the userright. My timezone is UTC (United Kingdom), so currently heading off to bed shortly but I'll be available tomorrow if you want to chat. Cheers, — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 21:31, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
- I'd suggest spending a bit of time over at WP:AfD. It is the single best place to learn the notability guidelines though and through, and always needs more help. I'd start with older discussions that already have a few !votes. This is probably the most productive way to get up skilled. The only other suggestion is to slow down a bit, be a bit more careful, and always explain yourself in edit summaries as much as possible (which helps eliminate confusion when you make mistakes). Hope to see you at NPP sometime in the future. Always available for a second opinion though. Cheers, — Insertcleverphrasehere (or here) 21:38, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
Request on 11:12:09, 29 October 2018 for assistance on AfC submission by JennS2018[edit]
JennS2018 (talk) 11:12, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
Hi, I have been editing a page about the company Icecat over and over again, however there seems to be always something missing.Could I please have some help with further editing in according to the rules of Wikipedia.
Ron S. Jarmin[edit]
Hi - I saw a notation that you edited this article 5 days ago but couldn't tell if you'd made any edits or if it had advanced to acceptance stage. Can you tell me of any status update? --Shel5136 (talk) 18:23, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Shel5136: Hi, thanks for asking me about it. I just added some sources to the draft to improve it. I am not reviewing it because I can't really tell if it should be accepted or not. When another reviewer accepts, declines or comments further on your draft, you'll be notified. You are free to keep working on your draft in the mean time to find better sources and more sources. Cheers. JC7V-talk 18:33, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
Thank you[edit]
Hi JC7V7DC5768! Thank you for paying attention to my request for help. But so far nobody has told me whether it is notability or not. I will be very grateful to you if you can say your opinion, regarding its notability, whether I should write such articles or not. Thank you! Aspireforintelligence (talk) 21:43, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Aspireforintelligence: Hi, a non admin AFC reviewer (like me) can't accept the draft since it is moved protected. While I am glad that you seek feedback, you are forum shopping (asking various editors to review the draft instead of waiting for it to be reviewed the natural way) and that's frowned upon here. Wait for a reviewer to review your draft and if it is declined, follow the advice he or she gives you in the decline/comment section. Thank you. JC7V-talk 22:02, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback. I understand that you cannot move it, but you can appreciate it for notability, for example in this comment, that would be enough for me. Aspireforintelligence (talk) 22:32, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- :: @Aspireforintelligence: Whether I believe the subject of your draft is notable or not doesn't matter since the only thing that matters is if the reviewer who reviews your draft thinks it is notable for inclusion. I appreciate your efforts and you seem like a good writer. If your draft is declined ,don't leave the site ,but read WP:ANYBIO and WP:GNG and find subjects which clearly pass at least one of those criterias and that you want to write about. Also you have to write your draft in a NPOV sort of way. If it's biased, even if notable it will be declined. See the template in the decline of your draft from the 25th to see what I mean. Cheers. JC7V-talk 22:51, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks, I do translations articles often, and sometimes I try to write. Here's how in the latter case, my article was checked, and when I turned to the administrator for recommendations, he transferred it to a draft, believing that I was getting paid for the work. I explained that it is not. He agrees to remove the protection if someone also considers the article as Notability. That's why I asked you to rate my article. But it looks like everybody is angry. Thank you for explaining to me why this is happening. Aspireforintelligence (talk) 23:48, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Aspireforintelligence: We're not angry, you just have to wait until a reviewer reviews your draft and either accepts or declines it. If its a decline, you have to follow the advice in the template that is used for draft declines. JC7V-talk 00:16, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Aspireforintelligence: Hi, a non admin AFC reviewer (like me) can't accept the draft since it is moved protected. While I am glad that you seek feedback, you are forum shopping (asking various editors to review the draft instead of waiting for it to be reviewed the natural way) and that's frowned upon here. Wait for a reviewer to review your draft and if it is declined, follow the advice he or she gives you in the decline/comment section. Thank you. JC7V-talk 22:02, 29 October 2018 (UTC)
Need help for further editing[edit]
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Can you please help me out how I can draft it for resubmission. And what this comment means?
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Victorghoshe11 (talk • contribs) 12:56, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
Comment: Weasel words and words to watch are all over this draft. Please fix these issues. I'll be glad to help if you need it
Hi[edit]
Hi Darrinisnothere (talk) 19:02, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
Not hurrasment[edit]
NOT Darrinisnothere (talk) 19:03, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Darrinisnothere: Hello, your message on Dreamy Jazz's talk page violated talk page policies so it was removed, see WP:USERPAGE. JC7V-talk 19:04, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
A barnstar for you![edit]
| The Anti-Vandalism Barnstar | |
| Good to see you on the Huggle IRC. Keep up your great work! I will return to it soon :) ―Abelmoschus Esculentus 14:32, 31 October 2018 (UTC) |
- @Abelmoschus Esculentus: Thanks for the barnstar, you've been doing great too. Keep up the good work. We can use all the help that we can get. JC7V-talk 14:35, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
Incomplete DYK nomination[edit]
Hello! Your submission of Template:Did you know nominations/Your Call Football at the Did You Know nominations page is not complete; if you would like to continue, please link the nomination to the nominations page as described in step 3 of the nomination procedure. If you do not want to continue with the nomination, tag the nomination page with {{db-g7}}, or ask a DYK admin. Thank you. DYKHousekeepingBot (talk) 15:34, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: Holly Farrell has been accepted[edit] Holly Farrell, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Stub-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.
Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! ProgrammingGeek talktome 15:49, 2 November 2018 (UTC) |
Please undelete HPEV Solar Fuel Cell article.[edit]
Kind thanks. RobertBercovitz (talk) 19:39, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
- @RobertBercovitz: Hello Robert, thank you for reaching out. Editors who want their articles undeleted go here: Wikipedia:Requests_for_undeletion and request it with a valid reason. However, HPEV Solar Fuel Cell still exists in draft form. So i suggest you work on that draft until it is ready and then you submit to via WP:Articles for Creation. Instructions on how to do so can be found there. Cheers. JC7V-talk 20:03, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
___ Greatly appreciate the feedback, @JC7V7DC5768:. Will do.
Rollback[edit]
- @Mz7: Hello, my rollback trial is about to expire and you said to ping you after a month and if everything looked ok, I'd get to keep my rollback rights. So can you please review my counter vandalism work I've done while I've had rollback and then tell me if I can keep it or not? Thank you for your consideration. JC7V-talk 20:35, 2 November 2018 (UTC)
Re: Suriname at the CONCACAF Gold Cup[edit]
Hi! Thanks for the reply and the suggestion. However, now without the overview it was promptly moved into draftspace due to lack of citations. :D
I think it looks better if the article provides a little more context and is more fleshed out like that, as well. I'll take care of it tomorrow though.
Working on Trinidad already. Cheers — Preceding unsigned comment added by Storkenleg (talk • contribs) 22:19, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
- Good luck on your draft/article work in the future. If you want to find reliable sources, check out this https://cse.google.com/cse?cx=010426977372765398405:3xxsh-e1cp8 search engine]. JC7V-talk 22:29, 3 November 2018 (UTC)
ValentinaLombardo[edit]
Hi, you just reject my page (Valentina Lombardo) i read your guidelines: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Notability_(music) And seems that the subject is notable because follow the criteria 4 in the paragraph "Criteria for musicians". (LA STAMPA one of the most famous italian newspaper) LINK: https://www.lastampa.it/2017/09/20/torinosette/eventi/la-pianista-valentina-lombardo-alla-chiesa-di-s-pelagia-fzZM5yDlYdCtzQ9mVmqLyL/pagina.html Can you approve the page? thanks (Valelombardo (talk) 16:53, 6 November 2018 (UTC))
- @Valelombardo: Hello, thanks for reaching out. While that maybe a reliable source, it is not enough to show notability as it just an announcement of one of Valentina's concerts (ie it's routine coverage). To show that Valentina is notable enough for inclusion, the should mention Valentina a paragraph or more and be independent of her. A story or in dept review of one of her shows for example would be something to show substantial coverage from a reliable source. See this article's references for the type you need to show in Valentina's article. Work on these issues and fix them, resubmit and someone will review the draft again .Cheers. JC7V-talk 16:58, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
A barnstar for you![edit]
| The Anti-Vandalism Barnstar | |
| Excellent job! Jebcubed (talk) 18:18, 6 November 2018 (UTC) |
I'll move the links for Desert Gold[edit]
Just to let you know, I'll repoint the links for Desert Gold to Desert Gold (horse) as you don't have AWB perms. Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 23:27, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
Done Dreamy Jazz 🎷 talk to me | my contributions 23:36, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
Copyvio[edit]
Thanks for your email. I agree that text looks rather suspicious but I can't find a source for it either so I'm not going to do a revdel. The important thing is that it was removed though, so thanks for that. Hut 8.5 21:27, 7 November 2018 (UTC)
Revdel request[edit]
Thanks for identifying an article which may need revision deletion:Shattered Grid, but you did not identify the source which had been copied.--S Philbrick(Talk) 14:49, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
- Sphilbrick, Hi, the copy pasted material in the Shattered Grid plot section came from here and here . Thanks
Article Submit - Musician[edit]
Hello,
Recently you have deleted a draft on Ganesh Chandrasekaran citing notability. I went through the references and the person is largely notable with this debut film where he has collaborated with leading artists. Further there are many references where he has been mentioned, not just passing references. As a wikipedian, I request you to go through his profile and consider a submission. Here is another reference I have found on his name.
https://www.behindwoods.com/tamil-movies-cinema-news-16/ezhada-song-making-ft-dhanush-ezhumin.html
Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 27.5.212.118 (talk) 15:09, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
- Hello, thanks for reaching out. The article on Ganesh was deleted via a deletion discussion about 2 months ago and since the Ganesh draft was identical to the Ganesh article when it was decided upon by consensus to be deleted, it had to be declined. You can keep adding sources (somewhat more than a few) to ithe draft (WP:RS and WP:IS ie reliable, independent sources) and let another reviewer review it which you should do so it won't be declined again . Good luck. JC7V-talk 16:15, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
Speedy deletion contested: Genevieve Clarke[edit]
Hello JC7V7DC5768, and thanks for patrolling new pages! I am just letting you know that I contested the speedy deletion of Genevieve Clarke, a page you tagged for speedy deletion, because of the following concern: Remove G12; the aaforringer page is a mirror of Jessica Alba, where this content is copied from, and a "lack of attribution" is not enough for G12 to apply per WP:CSD. Replacing with G3. You may wish to review the Criteria for Speedy Deletion before tagging further pages. Thank you. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 20:37, 11 November 2018 (UTC)
Ways to improve Mount Dora High School[edit]
Thanks for creating Mount Dora High School.
A New Page Patroller Boleyn just tagged the page as having some issues to fix, and wrote this note for you:
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Boleyn (talk) 06:53, 16 November 2018 (UTC)
A page you started (Dorothy Jean Hailes) has been reviewed![edit]
Thanks for creating Dorothy Jean Hailes.
I have just reviewed the page, as a part of our page curation process.
Good work overall. I've made some copy-edits to the article, mostly grammar fixes and rewordings for clarity and tone. You might want to look at the edits I've made so that your future articles can be even better. Let me know if there are any edits I made that you don't like. :-)
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SkyGazer 512 Oh no, what did I do this time? 18:33, 16 November 2018 (UTC)
WP:RM/TR and page mover right[edit]
I see you close some RM discussion, but you also list some discussion outcome in WP:RM/TR. So I hope you request page mover rights in WP:PERM to reduce these kinds of listings and these mean less arguments in WP:RM/TR, thanks Hhkohh (talk) 08:12, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
- Hi, I've closed a fair amount of Requested moves and subsequently made requests for moves I closed as moves at WP:RM/TR for all of the closed moves I couldn't move myself. I agree that the page mover right would help me in this task, but I haven't met the 6 month minimum requirement for it. JC7V (talk) 22:39, 17 November 2018 (UTC)
Ref: Nizar El Fakih[edit]
Hello!
Thank you for reviewing the article submission of Nizar El Fakih. I appreciate that a lot.
I'm curious about the two things you commented: 1) Drop the high amount of quotes and 2) Trim the interviews and collaboration the subject has had with the media.
I've always thought that everything I write in Wikipedia must come from a proven or legit source, so why you suggest I should drop the amount of quotes? How should I do it? Which criteria you recommend me to use when doing this?
Then, about trimming the interviews and collaborations... why you recommended this? How should I do it?
Thank you very much for your time.
Alams. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 200.82.146.211 (talk) 13:43, 19 November 2018 (UTC)