User talk:Jashreiner/sandbox

Overall there is a lot of good information and it is organized well. However in the quick facts section i think the page did not do what you wanted it to because all the different categories run together, you can use "*" to make bullet points for each one. Idonthaveacomputer (talk) 18:42, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

looks really good! lots of good information, and good statistics. 2 suggestions: first, fix some of the grammatical errors. second, after the first few times you use it, maybe substitute the words"alpha gamma delta" with the acronym "AGD" to make it easier to read. but after some more info, sources and links it should be good!! Acvanauken (talk) 18:45, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Good article! You did really well organizing. I agree with the suggestions above you just need to fix some grammatical errors and you should be good to go! - Kmbyers — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kmbyers (talk • contribs) 18:49, 5 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]