User talk:Lohithsatish/sandbox

Lohith's Peer Review

Your analysis of the article is very detailed and provides lots of good starting information to help propel your editing forward. I would encourage you to focus on reorganizing the article. It seems that there are lots of facts and sentences that have no cohesiveness throughout and I think it would help future editing come easier. This could also be finding information that is relevant to the topic and focusing on expansion in those areas. I appreciated the neutrality within your analysis and find that I need to focus on that when editing my article.

Peer Review: The article is very detailed and your additions do add to the page overall. Also, your explanations about the art during the time period was good as well as the connection to Waco when discussing the affects of the war outside of Europe. Although, I would make sure that your writing style is more formal and further unbiased. At sections in the "Art" paragraph it seemed more like an analysis of one of the paintings rather than a description of all the art produced during the time period. Overall good article.-Nick Iskandar — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nick Iskandar (talk • contribs) 16:53, 28 November 2018 (UTC)