User talk:Lollicupy
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[edit]Hello, Lollicupy, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:37, 24 February 2016 (UTC)
Please add citations
[edit]Hi Lollicupy! Please add more external citations to your page on Peche Di. I have added some internal cites and responded to some of the concerns expressed by the WP editor. Prof K or Dalton D. Hird 16:40, 6 March 2016 (UTC)
Feedback request
[edit]Hi Lollicupy. I'm responding to your request for feedback. What can I help you with? It looks like you're off to a pretty good start on Peche Di; in additional to the advice from DaltonHird above, you might focus on rewriting the first two sentences, so that the first sentence clearly indicates why Peche Di is notable — because she started Trans Models. And the language throughout the rest of the article should be more of the 'just-the-facts' style of Wikipedia articles, more than a telling of Di's personal story. If there's anything else you'd like specific help or feedback with, just leave a note for User:Adam (Wiki Ed), who is the Content Expert supporting your class.--Sage (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:54, 11 March 2016 (UTC)