User talk:Newyork.dream

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November 2009[edit]

Information.svg Please do not add content without citing verifiable and reliable sources, as you did to Grant's Farm. Before making any potentially controversial edits, it is recommended that you discuss them first on the article's talk page. Please review the guidelines at Wikipedia:Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. Please stop adding this material in without a source that actually says the Clydesdales have been removed. Neither the official webpage nor the one you keep linking to state this (yet). umrguy42 15:16, 17 November 2009 (UTC)


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Grant's Farm[edit]

Hi Newyork.dream, in addition to suggesting you read some of the links above, I particularly want to encourage you to watch the tone of your additions - Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and you seem to be writing more like a tourist brochure in tone. In particular, see WP:Advertising, point #5. umrguy42 16:41, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

Also, please read WP:MINOR about when to mark your edits as "minor". In a nutshell, significant addition of content (as opposed to merely fixing typos, rearranging sentences, correcting links/references, and formatting changes) should NOT be marked as "minor". umrguy42 16:43, 17 November 2009 (UTC)